| Author | Date Entered/Modified | Views |
| Daniel A. Stafford | 8/23/2000 12:12:05 PM 10/4/2022 4:53:27 PM | 948 |
Roller Drome
Roller Drome:
High school heaven wheels.
Soft, young, sparkling sweet she feels.
Warm, pretty sweater.
Holding hands to slow song skates.
Shy kisses to disco beats.
AquarianM
By: Daniel A. Stafford
(C)2000
Author's Comments
5-7-5, 7-7. Tanka.....interesting form, more freedom than Haiku. Freshman memories, 15 and untried, questing hearts. Madison, WI, still there, I think.
| Author | Date Entered/Modified | Views |
| Daniel A. Stafford | 8/23/2000 12:12:05 PM 10/4/2022 4:53:27 PM | 948 |
Total Comments: 1
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| Janine Daniel | spinnys@hotmail.com | www.spinnys.com | 8/23/2000 11:06:03 PM |
| It may be a renegade haiku but it says as little as it needs to, to paint an overall picture. I can see this one clearly in my mind. | |||